Hey, a fellow Etsian! Howdy!
I think it all looks great except for one thing. In your shop policies you state that, "I live a busy life but I will make every effort to mail your orders out to you in a timely fashion(1 to 3 business days after I receive payment)." It makes it sound a bit like getting an order will disrupt your life, but you'll try to ship it out quickly. IMO, you should just decide what is doable for you and stick with it. Just saying that your orders ship within 1-3 days is fine.
Love the hare fuzzies, lol. They're very cute!